Struggling with a draft of a memoir chapter or personal essay? The Revision Lab is a two-day intensive where you'll revise your work-in-progress live, with step-by-step exercises and editorial guidance. You'll work on both big-picture revision—structure, stakes, and theme—and sentence-level craft like voice, clarity, and rhythm. Through craft talks, step-by-step exercises, and live demos, you'll learn to read your work with an editor's eye and apply that lens to your own pages. You'll also receive a brief editorial snapshot on three pages, with targeted feedback on what's working and what needs attention.
Click “Add to cart” to join the intensive. Then, scroll down to add on an optional 1-hour Zoom coaching call. Finally, scroll up and click the cart in the top right to check out.
Struggling with a draft of a memoir chapter or personal essay? The Revision Lab is a two-day intensive where you'll revise your work-in-progress live, with step-by-step exercises and editorial guidance. You'll work on both big-picture revision—structure, stakes, and theme—and sentence-level craft like voice, clarity, and rhythm. Through craft talks, step-by-step exercises, and live demos, you'll learn to read your work with an editor's eye and apply that lens to your own pages. You'll also receive a brief editorial snapshot on three pages, with targeted feedback on what's working and what needs attention.
Click “Add to cart” to join the intensive. Then, scroll down to add on an optional 1-hour Zoom coaching call. Finally, scroll up and click the cart in the top right to check out.