Even the strongest stories falter if the sentences don’t sing.
You’ve revised your structure, developed your characters, and deepened your themes—but you’re still wondering, is this ready to submit, or does it need more work? Perhaps the prose feels flat, predictable, or cluttered with unnecessary words. Your voice doesn’t feel powerful. It’s not just you! Most writers face this challenge after completing their macro-level revisions: the sentences themselves need work, but it’s hard to see exactly what’s wrong or how to fix it. We all need a clear framework for evaluating prose at the sentence level.
This seminar focuses on the final polish—the sentence-level work that transforms a narrative from solid to striking. We’ll tackle the specific issues that drain energy from your prose: repetitive sentence structures that lull readers to sleep, vague language that tells instead of shows, and filler words that bloat your word count without adding meaning. You’ll learn how to fine-tune syntax, word choice, rhythm, and cadence to create prose that engages, surprises, and resonates with readers on every page.
Most importantly, you’ll develop the editorial eye to spot when your prose is polished and ready to be shared.
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